Feedback on Blog

After a showing my blog to the lecturer and the group I was in, the feedback/ advice are as follows:

• The shop - I could have another section for commissioned work

• I could expand on some of the blog post because some of them don't have an explanation or have very little.

• I could ask questions to myself like whats going to happen after I graduate.

• Notes - About work - Do they look alright. I need to say the right amount.

After getting this feedback, I am going to work on it. I would like my blog work better.

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